We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. They knew they not only had the bill from the hotel to worry about, but also the possibility of getting sued. Luan: We're sorry we sold all your stuff! During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. I feel like a fool! The sound of typing on a computer was heard for a few minutes. Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention - The Loud House Encyclopedia ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? I hate it that you don't have any feelings or care anymore! Except for Lynn). His sisters join too and put Lynn in her place. It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. Lincoln: I've had enough of this stupid costume! As she started getting cleaning supplies to try and restore the lobby to a sense of glory, Maddie thought to herself, 'If the kids did this to the lobby on their way to find their parents. And after that, the whole room was silent. I HATE THIS!!! Thats not how it works! "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. BECAUSE I DON'T WANT YOU LITTLE DEMONS ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN!" Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. "Do you have any idea how lousy you made us feel?" Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. (Family begins to come around. YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! Reacting to The Loud House (Fanfic) - TV Tropes As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. You overreact to everything! Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. It was wrong of me to blame you for my failure and call you bad luck! I was horrible to you! We need to follow them, they have to be Lincoln's! So they, begrudgingly, got in the back seats. ", (Lynn starts running towards him. luckily, it was unlocked, he opened it and went inside.) Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Thats what my problem is! Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" After one loss, she claims that Lincoln is bad luck. SQUIRRELS WIN! Not. AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" the loud house no such luck alternate ending deviantart ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. You don't care about me, you think I'm nothing, but a thing, you care about no one, but yourselves, you never wanted a boy, you don't have feelings, you all feel NOTHING ANYMORE!!! Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! Bad luck never happened before when he was there..but he said all we do is just mess things up..we really are the worst family ever Rita: We're sorry kids. Post a journal. Everyone heads to Vanzilla, but Lincoln still stays in place). As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. I hate softball! Lincoln turned to Lori and said, "I think we should call Aunt Ruth and tell her how we feel." Immediately, all the kids started shouting at the parents and, as they did so, the other guests and employees in the spa took this opportunity to escape, they didn't want to stay and watch mayhem unfold. I demand an explanation! I dont want to support you psychos! What seems to be the problem?" Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. Which she did. One of his friends added, "We're not messing with you. Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. (Both glare at each other) First you threaten me with your lousy pop stick of a baseball bat to make me come to a disgusting game thats nothing but a waste of time, than you blame me for your loss, than you help ruin my life, than youre too stupid to listen to my confession and admit that you were wrong and than at another stupid game you dont even make it up to me and you make me into some silly object! After half an hour, Lincoln begins to sweat like crazy and lose his mind. We wont! The siblings had their arms either crossed on their chest or on their thighs in a wing stance, but they were all glaring at their parents. Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! Just a head's up. ", Lincoln: "No, Lucy. She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. I have failed as a human being. Lincoln: Enjoy your life in suits! Lola: WE'RE HORRIBLE BRATS!!! Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! Lori said. Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. Bobby: Well, I hope her legs are capable of making up for it. "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." "So," Lori started with, in an icy tone, "Let's recall what we promised you when you agreed to take us on vacation." (cries). Lincoln: Happy Valentines Day, Ronnie Anne. Lincoln then brought his arms back, suggesting a family hug. More information No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane More like this House Cartoon Cartoon Fan Cartoon Shows (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? ", Baseball Announcer: "Talk about bad luck. Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! Are you no longer grounded to the room?" Lucy. Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. "SAVE IT, RITA!" "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" *, Lincoln: It's not fair. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! the goth girl added. "I'm not sure," Felix responded with, "I've got two groups of people saying they have one of our hotel rooms at the same time. ], Baseball Announcer: "Yowza." If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. Lana: (sniffles) Butthese were all our pride and joy! But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! He staggers inside, weak and collapsed. I MESSED UP!!! Lincoln: You can't do anything right! ", Lori: (smiles forgivingly) "It's alright, Lincoln. Nsl Stories - Wattpad No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. It really doesn't. Incredible from The Incredibles on the cover. She said, in an angry tone, before blowing a raspberry her parents, covering them in her spit. Lola: How could he?! "But you know what's not fair?" Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" You can't ground us, we're the parents!" I don't want you quit something you love because of me. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. Experimental One Shot. ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? I'll definitely come to your next game, Lynn. But right now, ive had it! While they were still upset about their parents' behavior and getting them kicked out of an awesome hotel, they understood why they did what they did and understood that they shouldn't had forced their parents to take them on their vacation. I hate concerts! But dont worry, youre still a great writer. Lola finished with. Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. NOBODY!!! In. Lucy: But..but you wanted us to believe it. ", Rita: "And this time, we'll let Lincoln decide what movie we'll watch. Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. Did anything bad ever happen at your concerts with me there? ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. Lincoln: Okay. They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. "And just remember," Lori said, and then she and her siblings yelled one last time, "WE HATE YOU!" This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. I can take being kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, butbeing locked out of my own home?! You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! (thinks for a minute) "Hmm. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. But the woman did, "That your parents were caught skinny dipping after hours? I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 The Loud House No Such Luck FanficThe Loud House: No Such Luck The worst part is, they had no argument against this. Any bad luck? Lynn sat next to her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, in an attempt to comfort her. Start talking. "Sure thing," the voice on the other end said. And can you please unlock my room for me? We had no idea this family could be so gullible. That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. White hair extended ending9. Also, her kids weren't wrong about the pudding, that stuff was so vile it would turn her stomach into a BMX dirt track for days, so the kids' decision had its positives after all. What do you think, Pep? Lucy: Gasp! [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] ", Luna: "No, you were right. (They arrive home. Especially Miss. She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? Honestly, while Rita still a little sad that her dear aunt disowned her and her family, she thought it was for the best, if Ruth felt it was right to call her children monsters then that wasn't someone she wanted her family to be around. "Lynn? Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? Since the room is occupied, it should've shown up as that in the computer database. Lana: *Gasp* All my pets are now homeless! LYNN LOUD HITS A GRAND SLAM!!! Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. I am bad luck! Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. After she did, Leni didn't get angry, but she did get upset, very upset at her parents. You're all insane!!! Even though Lincoln was the one who brought this on himself. TLH: Scoop Snoop (Alternate Ending) by LuisLoudestFan on DeviantArt after they let go, Lincoln notices Lynn standing with her head down.) I kinda have mixed feelings on this alternate ending, though Im leaning more on the approval side. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! INT-LOUD HOUSE-LINCOLN'S ROOM (Lincoln and Lucy have just finished reading the new homemade comic that she made for him.) No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. It's no fun without Lincoln! Lincoln After Dark | The Loud House Fanon Wikia | Fandom Loud House Alternate Ending: Out of the Picture by . Lola added, shouting. Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Luna: We dont go to everybodys events all the time bro! You're like some mindless mob and I hate that! Lincoln finally got through to them, but he didn't feel happy about seeing them cry, he knew he was still partly to blame), Leni: (with a broken voice) "What have we done?! I hate that you sold my bed and everything I had! Cuts back to now. The End. My coffin. Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. Why? Lori finished with. Reacting to The Loud House is an ongoing series of The Loud House and The Casagrandes fics written by J Tom (or JTom09) in which many characters from both shows watch episodes of said shows. Also, just to note, not all of my stories are going to be this gritty or serious or emotional. (Cries) All my precious tiaras. The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. No such luck alt ending5. They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. I'm not bad luck. ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? (continues to cry. (Groans) I'll never live this down.(covers her face). Making Lincoln think we don't care about him? This is a family moment. Luna: I can't believe we made him feel as if we can't feel anymore or that we don't love and care for him. And you better start talking now!". I hate golf! "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. (he goes to the living room window. ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. After a minute, "Hello," the gruff sound of their Aunt Ruth was heard. WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! Time i sort out these looney superstitions once and for all!! I didn't think you guys would believe I was bad luck, even going as far as to lock me out. "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. Would you mind me speaking to Angus for a bit? "Now I want an explanation," the man started with, as he stomps a few steps toward them, "As to all of this. I'll never be able to play games the best way again! And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? How convenient for me. I guess this proves it! I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? Now, let me make this clear! "Room 5," Felix answered with, "On the 11th floor." Lucy shouted, "WE DREAD GOING TO VISIT YOU AND DREAD LOOKING AT YOUR GROSS FACE!" "So just so you can remember clearly," Lincoln started with, before he and his sisters got red in the face, "WE HATE YOU!" Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! He flies over to her and onto her hand.) Post an update . Lincoln: That's what i always say. I don't even care about that anymore. turns her attention to Lincoln) "Get out! Lynn Sr.: NO! Lola: (sniffles) He called us all dummies.and a waste of life. Luan: (starts to cry) He also called us monsters..that we don't care for anyone, but ourselves.. Lana: He did have a point. Lucy: "He's actually doing pretty good." Lynn: [nerviously] "Yeah, decent enough. Goodbye for now. I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. Even you Lisa! Well just grin and bear it. Lynn: FINE! Lynn: Put that suit back on Lincoln! Hearing that made the parents sigh in disappointment, they should've known their kids would break things and hoped the bill wouldn't be that much, but also knew that odds were that the bill was going to be massive. My team needs that! Lincoln: Stop it! "The Loud House" No Such Luck/Frog Wild (TV Episode 2017) - IMDb Lincoln: Shut up, you loud-mouthed dope! Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. He's a big fan of you, Lincoln; and he told me that you're working with news. NOTHING!! I hate that you all act so smart and serious and important when you're not! (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). We got your back. Hmm. Im melting! After that, Rita began crying, a member of her family that she loved despite everyone else hating her had just disowned her and her family. Luck. ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. Share your thoughts, experiences and the tales behind the art. Takes place in the middle of the events of the infamous episode No Such Luck. ", Lincoln: "Guys, it's me!" alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." I need to hide! ", Luan: "The same goes for all of us. Post-Story Notice: Anyway. The siblings and parents saw Leni standing there, mom and dad were curious why Leni wasn't with them in the room but before they could say anything, Lisa answered her, "Yes my second oldest sibling. My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna.